“Someone Noticed,” Poem, Mckenzie Fischer.
I see him every Friday. Thick accent, careful smile, buggy stacked the same way, two bags of
bird seed, a pound of shrimp, a pound of catfish. He never misses.
I remember noticing the knots first. Every bag tied, double-tied. After a few weeks I started
helping him. I bag, he double-knots, I carry groceries to the cart. Sometimes he needs a second
buggy. Normally we have a stocker help, but I step in because I know his broken English makes
it hard to explain. I tell the other cashiers to tie his bags if I’m not around. He looks surprised
every time, like it’s a small miracle someone cares.
He pays in hundred-dollar bills. Always polite, quiet. Once, he mentioned his daughters. Bird
seed made me think of them. I wondered how he managed everything, wondered how honest,
hardworking people survive without anyone noticing.
Weeks pass. I don’t notice he’s gone until almost a month later. Among the TikToks and news
alerts about ICE, it hits me. No Friday wave, no smile, no familiar routine. My stomach tightens.
I think about all the Fridays he showed up, all the grocery bags tied, the small talk about shrimp
and catfish, the quiet trust.
I hope his daughters are safe, not confused, maybe even smiling, waiting for him. Maybe, just
maybe, he’s still with them, feeding the birds, going to a different grocery store. Deep down I
know they took him away. He would never miss a Friday.
Mckenzie Fischer writes when she feels there is nothing left to do but tell the truth. This piece comes from her experience working with the general public and witnessing how easily humanity can be overlooked. She hopes her writing encourages empathy toward immigrants.